A Cupid's Arrow Effect

Cupid released his arrow Oh to my heart it burrow A small dent it did draw Thus, heartbeat tremble not narrow I look to him by the sides My blushing face, I wanna hide Lips smiling so lovely wide Steadying even my feet so as not to slide Catching my breath to speak Unwavering not to run and hick Words to utter, I carefully pick Appearing firm not to be weak It seems like the first time This I know doesn't happen anytime Hearing the wind of chimes Praying now and then not whine by: olive_eloi 9:24pm 01/02/2014

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James Fraser

Date: 11/24/2014 11:17:00 AM

Cupids Arrow can have that effect. Which arrow strikes true, then he's to select, James :)

Robin Davis

Date: 5/10/2014 12:05:00 PM

Olive Such a wonderfully written poem on love. The words flow so freely from your heart and show how much you care for this person. Thank you for the kind comment on my Her Dream Boy poem.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/10/2014 12:29:00 PM

Thanks much robin..:)

Michael Byte

Date: 1/6/2014 4:50:00 PM

Beautiful poem on love Olive. I can feel you writing this as you feel and see the love in your mind and heart. Your soup friend Michael