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A Crystal Tear

As angels gathered ‘round I heard sweet music play They played this song for you On this, your special day I cried a crystal tear Upon my cheek it did lay I cried this special tear As God called you away I put this tear in my pocket There is where it will stay Within a heart shaped locket Until we meet again one day Copyright © 2009 Lena “Lolita” Townsend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/16/2009 12:52:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words Lolita.Have a good weekend.Rgds brian
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Date: 5/6/2009 2:53:00 PM
This is truely remarkable my friend, you can feel the pain through these perfectly woven lines. Thank you for your kind comments on my work, always appreciated.
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Date: 5/2/2009 4:41:00 PM
oh Lena.... you have written a gorgeous jewel this time (again!) this poem was felt deep inside me...cool!! Jim
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Date: 5/1/2009 12:37:00 PM
What a sad and heartfelt poem. Wow! This is a wonderful poem with the emotion flowing through the words. So creative. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 5/1/2009 3:57:00 AM
Simply beautiful...just a gorgeous write my friend...loved it.
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Date: 5/1/2009 1:53:00 AM
Nice work, I love the tone of the poem...Raul
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Date: 5/1/2009 1:06:00 AM
Just one word Lolita..beautiful.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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