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I visited New Orleans years before hurricane Katrina where hundreds were killed and eighty percent of the city was flooded. I saw the Mardi Gras Parade, I listened to jazz music on Bourbon Street and I took a tour of the French Quarter, the Vieux Carre, the oldest and most unique neighbourhood in New Orleans. I saw lots of great architecture, unique treasures, but I was drawn to the Creole townhouses. courtyards and arcades balconies with steep pitched roofs speaks of history There was one townhouse dripping with green that touched my soul. It spoke to me of the struggle and poverty and racial strife and of the vibrant history of this old city. The falling foliage spoke of great pride and was exquisite to behold, so picturesque. Timeless was the beauty, alive and reflective of history. After Katrina, I worried for this house of beauty, but I heard that, The Quarter suffered relatively little damage from flooding, although some were damaged from wind. Oh what became of that beautiful townhouse? I wish I knew. oh did brick save you you were high above the sea do the plants still drip ___________________________ December 29, 2015 Haibun For the contest, A House In New Orleans, sponsor, Lin Lane Third Place

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Date: 2/6/2016 9:03:00 PM
Broken, I am here to make the best of my smile, since I can't write real poetry. LINDA
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Date: 2/6/2016 11:11:00 AM
You are welcome
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Date: 2/6/2016 1:55:00 PM
Your forever support it appreciate !
Date: 2/5/2016 12:41:00 AM
Wonderful win. LINDA
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Date: 2/5/2016 10:07:00 AM
Linda, thanks for the visit and the wonderful !
Date: 1/29/2016 10:27:00 AM
Nicely crafted haibun, BW, and a great story.
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Date: 1/29/2016 2:16:00 PM
James, thanks for visiting and for the compliment ~
Date: 1/29/2016 5:37:00 AM
Very well penned Haibun dear BW, congratulations on your WIN......
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Date: 1/29/2016 2:18:00 PM
and the congratulations !
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Date: 1/29/2016 2:17:00 PM
Archana, thanks for visiting and for the compliment ~
Date: 1/28/2016 11:55:00 PM
Congrats on ur great win with this wonderful write Broken..
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Date: 1/29/2016 2:18:00 PM
Upma, thanks for the congrats and the wonderful !
Date: 1/28/2016 11:53:00 PM
Wonderful Haibun, dear Constance. Many congrats on your will deserved win. Sincerely, Elaine
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Date: 1/29/2016 2:19:00 PM
Elaine, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats, so appreciated !
Date: 1/28/2016 7:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this interesting imagery!
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Date: 1/29/2016 2:20:00 PM
Susan, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment !
Date: 1/28/2016 4:09:00 PM
You must have spent a long time on research Broken Wings many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/28/2016 4:13:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the congrats and hugs, yes I did, hours of research went into this write ~
Date: 1/28/2016 3:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your 3rd place finish, BW. Thanks for entering.
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Date: 1/28/2016 4:05:00 PM
Lin, thanks for a great contest and my wonderful placement, honored !
Date: 1/28/2016 3:10:00 PM
Broken Wings, congrats on your placement! Full of beauty..*smiles* -luloo
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Date: 1/28/2016 4:06:00 PM
Laura, thanks for the congrat, the beauty and the smiles !
Date: 1/9/2016 3:28:00 PM
I love the title of this amazing poem. I am also interested in Creole History! Great write!
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Date: 1/9/2016 4:22:00 PM
Ayesha, thank you for the amazing, I did tons of research to do this poem, I pray the sponsor likes it ~
Date: 12/31/2015 4:24:00 AM
Beautiful poem....I'd like to know what happened to the house, so if you happen to find out....and good luck in the contest
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Date: 12/31/2015 6:26:00 AM
Shehu, thanks for visiting and for the beautiful, I guess I have to go back to New Orleans and search for the house to find out ~
Date: 12/29/2015 7:38:00 PM
Lol , One great line ..loved it...hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 12/29/2015 8:38:00 PM
Dalia, thanks for visiting, but there is more to come, stay tuned ~

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