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A Crazy Old Man

He walked the world as golden. He had scholar many schools of thought. He himself is wise and a body of knowledge. He sat in his exam room with his mouth compressed. He seems to know success as success. Just a crazy old man I am with. The image before me states I am wrong. I know an individual can hide his or her frustration. However, the dilemma appears to be delirium. He backs a wall and the given impression is that of equanimity. Henceforth, he moves to ladder his thinking of equability. He will fall in old age into an invalid state, but today he does well. This is a crazy old man’s masquerade. I see your suffering. A façade that is veiled by your inner person is not disguised well. You do as you should with your privacy. There's no reason to reveal your pain for the world to see. A crazy old man may not be. The status of life states you win against your mental you. You have done many things that defeat the truth. Influence is not assumed, but you seek dominance in rule. A senile journey that describes the image shown is a quiet vicinity you call home. A crazy old man is therefore not known. Light a candle today to bless your time in the world. Your focus must be that of wisdom and soul. You have done well in your chosen career. You have been a part of iniquity. Precarious times are here. A crazy old man is a way of being. ____________________________| PENNED ON JUNE 23, 2014!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/1/2014 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations Verlena, in PD's contest!!!! A wonderful piece of work!!!! ^_^
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/1/2014 9:25:00 AM
Thanks Teddy... Verlena
Date: 7/29/2014 6:07:00 PM
Well written Verlena, The challenges of getting older and hiding such internal struggles from the worlds view. Great win in PD's contest :)
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/29/2014 6:45:00 PM
Thanks Casarah.
Date: 7/29/2014 2:23:00 PM
thank you for the smile and hug
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Date: 7/29/2014 1:34:00 AM
Very find exclusive write Verlena! Congrats on huge win my friend!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/29/2014 1:39:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Sharma... Verlena
Date: 7/28/2014 9:03:00 PM
Big congrats on your fine win!!!!
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:58:00 PM
Verlena, Congratulations!!! Have fun enjoying the win. I'm grateful, everything went well when judging this contest. Take care, and enjoy my latest blog "Maybe I'm Invisible" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/28/2014 8:19:00 PM
I will do such. I have a question, what's up? A smile and hug being sent from a Soup friend. LVerlena
Date: 6/26/2014 9:34:00 PM
a very interesting one. What made you think to write of someone getting old and crazy? I sure hope this is not me in the near future. haha. Luv, Andrea (hmmm, I just saw what you said to Jeremy. Come on, my friend, YOU???)
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/26/2014 10:43:00 PM
Thanks for your response Andrea. To Jeremy, LOL. A Crazy Old Man is eccentric. Verlena :0))s.
Date: 6/24/2014 8:55:00 AM
Excellent. Interesting write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/24/2014 10:36:00 AM
Thanks for your supportive remarks Ravi. Verlena
Date: 6/23/2014 6:06:00 PM
Such an interesting crazy old man.. Interesting and great poem!!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/23/2014 6:20:00 PM
Thanks Doris... One that will manifest one day... Verlena
Date: 6/23/2014 4:24:00 PM
Let's Lift Our Chalices High In One Final Toast For His, Crazy Old Man....KLove *
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/23/2014 5:18:00 PM
Oh, and Jeremy I am a Her. Verlena
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/23/2014 5:16:00 PM
What meaning is this when A Crazy Old Man shoul be the Trophy you are lifting to award to the author, your's truly. Verlena LOL.

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