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A Country Fair Tale

“Toss a ring and snag a duck And you will win a rabbit!” My grown-up brother soon was hooked – For challenge was his habit. We were at a country fair; The barker was enticing. Proving he could win came first; The rabbit was the icing. My brother slapped his dollar down And got five plastic rings. The wooden ducks were floating, But the barker pulled the strings. For many dollars later, Though my brother’s aim was true, The man in charge reached down and said, “This special duck’s for you.” He placed it in the water And one toss was all it took; The “special duck” was snatched away, Without a second look. My brother won his rabbit Which he couldn’t even keep. We learned a lesson, though, that day, Although it wasn’t cheap: At country fairs or carnivals, Beware the barker’s lure. If you’re convinced you’ll beat their game, You’ll lose your shirt for sure!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/26/2012 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Lisa's "Unnamed County Fair"contest Ilene. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/23/2012 12:09:00 PM
ConGradulations On Your Win Jane XoXo
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Date: 7/23/2012 9:05:00 AM
Great poem and story about the carnival at the fair. Congratulations on your win which also should have been higher. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/23/2012 5:02:00 AM
very nice poem...very true message....like everyone, I have been tricked and cheated on fairgrounds but i t seems like fun at the time .....and remains as a good memory....congrats on your success in this contest Ilene....bestwishes
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Date: 7/23/2012 3:29:00 AM
ilene congrats on your win, love it..David
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Date: 7/5/2012 3:05:00 AM
This is great,,,,, I love it,,,, my daughter and I were just talking about taking my g-daughter to the fair which starts on the 15 Aug ;}
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Date: 7/3/2012 3:57:00 PM
I'm SPEECHLESS!!!!!!!!! :))
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Date: 7/3/2012 7:23:00 AM
Good story - we always think we can beat the system! good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 7/3/2012 6:23:00 AM
hahaha, what Robert said about Mormons playing bingo in salt lake!! Also, some of them cross the border to a small Nevada town where they can gamble. A very boring little place it is!!
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Date: 7/3/2012 6:21:00 AM
GREAT way to do this contest, to discuss the scams of the carnival. They sure took us all for a RIDE. hahaha. ME LIKES this.
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Date: 7/2/2012 9:42:00 PM
People should also beware of all those casinos popping up like weeds in practically all the states. The Mormons consider any form of gambling the worst sin after committing murder. However, they have bingo parlors operating in downtown Salt Lake City! Good write Ilene.
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Date: 7/2/2012 7:33:00 PM
Very good story you have penned about that Fair and a good learning at the end.Best wishes Ilene.
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Date: 7/2/2012 7:04:00 PM
Very funny... and (unfortunately) very true... nice poem... I like it... Terry
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