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A Cookie Full of Bullets

I open my package of oatmeal raisin, chocolate chips cookies I scraped away the sun dried devils and devoured the chocolate chips of course but something felt funny, so I forced my finger down my throat and puked up my lunch, the yellow,green concoction contradicted the lead filled little bites of death and I also spit up some blood as well stomach pains and heart palpitations were my best friends for the next 3 months reminding me that if I ever buy cookies online again make sure the package doesn't say "from Russia with love..."

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Date: 11/29/2015 11:01:00 PM
Hi Antonio, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/29/2015 9:56:00 PM
Antonio, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/28/2015 2:55:00 PM
Hi Antonio, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/28/2015 2:56:00 PM
Thanks :)

Book: Shattered Sighs