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A Confused Mind

A Confused Mind Life has so many questions, Sometimes more then answers can be found Though my confused mind seeks resolution, It doesn’t always come around. There is a fine line for walking, A narrow road that seems to wind. There’s a purpose for traveling, There is a destination to find. “What are you waiting for”, Goes the voice inside my mind. If you never leap out in faith, No rainbow you will find. One foot in front of the other, And soon I’m out the door. With a lump in my throat, I’m ready to explore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/26/2011 7:05:00 PM
a great piece of poetry, enjoyed reading it. thank you for your comment on Brandon my grandson.
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Date: 4/26/2011 2:40:00 PM
Hi Jeff! The second stanza pretty well sums up to a solution for "A Confused Mind". "Purpose" and "destination" are found only when one has the tenacity and courage to travel beyond "the door"? Hope we can find this sometimes elusive "rainbow". Wishing you the best...Mikki
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Date: 4/26/2011 2:33:00 PM
I enjoed your poem.
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