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In the absence of complication, trials and tribulations become distant memories. Above sapphire skies delight sanguine eyes - inspiring forthcoming musings of the mind. In a drowsy hypnagogic state, I see thee far away, A dazzling, delightful, divine ethereal spirit Drifting in the vastness of amaranthine space Beckoning toward patches of divergent hues. I discover sublime elation at the scene, Impossible to restrain and slowly I open my manuscript Write all that I can see, visions impossible to discern. Why could I never capture the aesthetic beauty before me? My yearning overtakes my aspirations to capture The quintessence of such elusive diaphanous beauty Till I wake, look around, feel sweat of ephemeral queasiness, Read my endeavours in a language I could not discern.

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Date: 6/22/2022 8:05:00 PM
I see the elusive diaophanous beauty in this image and in your poem . Great diction dear friend ....
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Date: 4/8/2021 10:53:00 AM
Some things are so awesome and lovely that their description is as elusive as dreams. A marvelous poem, Victor. :D
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Date: 3/23/2021 2:35:00 PM
Victor, I don’t think as many years we will grasp everything of what is around us. Great write
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Date: 3/23/2021 3:04:00 AM
Some beauty is beyond mortal words only when we become immortal will we have the capacity to understand and speak the language of the divine. Your presence at my page is always encouraging. Sara
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Date: 3/22/2021 8:52:00 PM
Wow! A complicated write for sure, loved your variety of tough words, Victor:) gives the poem an ethereal feel:)
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Date: 3/22/2021 2:42:00 PM
wow. Very poetic lovely writing from you , Victor.
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Date: 3/22/2021 11:15:00 AM
I like the dreamy quality of this poem, Victor. I, too, am at loss to describe divine spirits. But you do capture beauty, Victor. This poem proves that. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 3/22/2021 11:13:00 AM
- Glad you are open to comments again ... because this is a wonderful poem, Victor - Hope the vaccine went well ... one more and you will be ready for the world ... I'm still a little skeptical of the vaccine - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/22/2021 11:10:00 AM
Quite a deep write that takes the reader through a dream like state. Tom Hope you got on ok at Docs.
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Date: 3/22/2021 7:01:00 AM
Musings of the mind, sublime elation--you got hold of that elusive beauty in this poem, Victor. Your vision beams splendidly in this write. Excellent, write.
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Date: 3/22/2021 6:43:00 AM
WoW!Victor, You have penned such a deep and well written write. It must have been a captivating vision as well. PS, I hope your doctor's visit is smooth sailing. Have a wonderful day, my friend:-) Alexis
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