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A Collaboration With Mystic Rose Poem Titled Breathe

Don't ask questions, neither you or I can answer but let us glide gracefully together as smooth and swift as a dancer Anticipating beauty residing within the boundaries of what's unkown The sky grows dark As the wind howls Calling me back home What you seek for you I'll find it be my guidance if ever I seem blinded feel love with no fear Simply because I don't seeking out the love that my heart won't Being free as I break away upon the clouds I wish to lay Searching for something When I find none doesn't mean it's over I've only just begun My love for you slowly drifts back into reality how I love so much Is that which my eyes have just seen To the moon I go in search of the sun as brightness shines into my eyes The wind howls and I close them such a beautiful escape, it's something like a dream. Breathe.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/26/2016 7:20:00 PM
Benquetta Flemmings, this is a lovely collaboration, love ynr-skat
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Date: 1/13/2016 12:28:00 AM
Your poem is beautiful, Benquetta, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA
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Benquetta Flemmings
Date: 1/13/2016 3:15:00 PM
Hello Linda. I thank you for your comment on my poem. It was challenging, but, I accepted said challenge. I also look forward to viewing writings and getting to know more poets such a s yourself. The best of luck and encouragement to all of your endeavors.
Date: 1/12/2016 8:15:00 PM
Very good Benquetta! Good luck in the contest! *smiles* -luloo
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Benquetta Flemmings
Date: 1/12/2016 9:01:00 PM
Hi Laura. Thank you so much. I'm definitely smiling now.

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