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A Cold Love of a Dark Lover

burning dimly like a fading candle light wrapping the hearts of lovers in the dark surrounding them in total night that's baron and cold and stark none can give merciless nightmares none except the cold, dank dark slaying the lovers heart like a blade; smeared in Black death for no lovers love is left un-dismayed a cold wind submerges the broken heart in a quilt of cold, and wraps its new love in a light so golden and warm, being slayed by the very death that lured it to it's clutches; smearing the new blood, making the dying one ask, "What is this love? i do not know it, what is it?" not all love is together, a lover's love is broken, so many pieces, so much pain on both sides..... one may think that the heartbreaker will see his own blood thirsty lie, for it kills him as well. it leaves him in a dark and lonely hell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/7/2010 5:11:00 PM
Interesting metaphoric language usage in this one...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/7/2010 3:00:00 PM
strong write,, enjoyed..p.d.
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Date: 6/7/2010 9:06:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Corazon. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2010 8:53:00 AM
So enjoyed reading your creative write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/7/2010 8:18:00 AM
wonderful thoughts
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:20:00 AM
Expressing the love in a dark form. Nice way to compare love to the darkest way in the death. LOVED your deep poem of love.-IRMA
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