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A Closed Chapter

her gait reminds me of her name.... a closed chapter ================== Placement:9th;(September 2011) Contest:Any haiku will do Sponsor:Irma Linda

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/28/2011 8:24:00 AM

Dear Kash---Although you are away, you better be writing in your poet's notebook to keep the energy flowing! Your work is missed....I know...your brain is on hiatus....you are forgiven. ha ha. Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2011 2:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Any Haiku Will Do" Kashinath. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/18/2011 11:32:00 AM

i seem to be the only one who doesn't get this. anyway, congrats on your win :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/18/2011 9:33:00 AM

CONGRATS KASH MY FRIEND ON ANOTHER GRAND WIN WITH AWESOME HAIKU WORDS LUV..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/18/2011 7:29:00 AM

I completely GET THIS ONE! You sly dog! lololololol. You are definately in a new chapter....that chapter must have been eons ago! Great haiku. I had to read it twice! Gwendolen

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/18/2011 7:23:00 AM

Beautifully written and enjoyed it. Congratulation for your win. bl

David Williams

Date: 9/18/2011 6:24:00 AM

kash congrats on your win, i wonder what her name is?..david

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2011 3:54:00 AM

Kash,, a wonderful .Congratulations on your Haiku win, ;-). Thank you so much for entering and sharing your poem.Thanks for supporting my contest,, God bless,... LINDA

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/17/2011 3:27:00 PM

ey there, moonwalker.. yup, it's for tracie; dang this headache, ahooo! ( turns into a wolf!)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/17/2011 2:53:00 PM

hello, bengali tiger!...where's you muse?? rwahhhrrr! natalie's contest did not specify only one dodoitsu... so there.. what's new?? miss your songs!! :) huggs to you, kashi..:) nette

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/16/2011 1:39:00 PM

this one makes me cringe in its own sense of beauty , kashi... the last line cliches the 'ku... terrific! :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2011 12:20:00 PM

hmmm, this one is mysterious, Kash. Do you mean the way she walks reminds you of her name or do you mean her name sounds like gait? I like it! And thanks for getting up a new poem today!! (old soupmail if you didn't see it)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/16/2011 12:01:00 PM

wow Kash I just said the same last line to an old flame who contacted me a few days ago.. awesome to close a bad chapter in life.. great extension of feelings luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/16/2011 11:33:00 AM

Oooh! youchy! but what's done is done, right? Next chapter please! and thanks for dropping by my new poem, yikes, seems like I haven't written in ages, lol ;)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 9/16/2011 11:42:00 AM

haha! well you sure got me, kash :p well that's good to know though ;)-- keep on writing!