Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

A clear mind

Violet Darling Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled A clear mind which was written by poet Violet Darling. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Violet Darling

Best Violet Darling Poems

+ Fav Poet

A clear mind

I'm just listening        
The composition of beaded notes          
dive at an angle aimed at my calves        
Clear projectiles implode on my skin          
slinking down toward my ankles        
The rhythm is constant          
Solid patterns          
A humming opus composed by the grey          
leaving translucent tones around my feet    
I could listen forever      
The drenching sound      
makes me       

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 8:36:00 AM
    aww cool write, welcome to poetry soup

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 4:36:00 PM
    Enjoyed this piece Violet.. Well done!

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 5:27:00 PM
    Interesting Free Verse..Enjoyed reading this eve...Welcome to soup..May your stay be long with many more great post like this..Sara

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 6:26:00 PM
    Violet, very deep,..... excellent poem, thank you for sharing~ Always PD

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 11:46:00 AM
    Hi Violet well writte loved it, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 8:14:00 AM
    A well done poem Violet, thank you for visit mine poem today - Happy to see you, welcome back. - Have a lovely day. - oxox love from Anne-Lise