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A City's Personality

A personality, Ends in fatality, Witness a city alive, Pastry smells fill the air, Architecture you stare, Business, people make it thrive, Each city has its feel, Recession ends the steel, Can it possibly revive? Written by Lee Ramage September 30, 2011 For Dr. Ram Mehta’s contest Balassi Stanza won 6th Place

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Date: 7/27/2012 6:07:00 PM
very creative work. I don't know scoot about all the different forms of poetry. I just write what I feel. I guess I should learn about them all XXOO anne
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Date: 7/27/2012 6:09:00 PM
Thanks Anne, I don't know either, but you just try! Lee
Date: 10/24/2011 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's "Balassi Stanza" contest Lee. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/23/2011 4:31:00 PM
Way to write a Balassi, Lee! Well done and timely to boot. Congrats, happy day, namaste~N
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Date: 10/23/2011 11:08:00 AM
Some won't make it..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/23/2011 8:41:00 AM
Congrats Lee on an amazing win with this exciting entry of poetic art luv.. always super to read your words so expressive...
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Date: 10/23/2011 5:18:00 AM
Awesome verse Lee. Congratulations on your win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/23/2011 3:44:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in my contest, Lee
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Date: 10/1/2011 12:35:00 PM
greeat work and great eye for life;s wonders, lee.. lots of luck! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 10/1/2011 6:38:00 AM
Great theme packed in nice style,Lee.I liked it.A great entry for the contest.Thank you for your nice comments on my verse.Have a nice day!
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Date: 10/1/2011 2:36:00 AM
I sure hope prosperous times can be revived, Lee. This is an awesome Balassi. Dr. Ram is sure to love it. Best wishes in his contest! Love, Carolyn
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