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A Christmas Story

A Christmas Story He looks at the cards hung over the fire Suspended in air by the finest of wire One from his wife, his children and friends Christmas he loves and he’s sad when it ends Ceilings are decked with the seasonal trim The tree is all set, baubled to the brim Presents are wrapped, all ready to give It’s that time of year he loves to relive He sits by the tree and a fire lit ball The image reflects of the babe in the stall A donkey is there, the parents look on Surrounded by shepherds and kings in a throng He see’s the whole story, slowly unfold As each in their turn, gives baby a hold And the great star above shines brightly and new And the world is at peace for a moment or two He then see’s the past when his children were young The house full of laughter and carols were sung When visitors called for a glass of best sherry Good cheer was abroad and everyone merry Now the children have grown and live far away No more with new toys will he see them play His wife had passed on, a long time before Each year that passes, he misses her more Then the ball on the tree shows him all alone In the house that was once his family’s home Rolls a tear from his eye, drips from his chin Does somebody, somewhere, still think of him? He leans back in his chair and his eye catches sight Of the cards he hangs there each Christmas night Suspended in air by the finest of wire He looks at the old cards hung over the fire A knock at the door brings him back to life He answers and finds it’s the ghost of his wife “They’re not coming to you, so we’ll go to them” It’s our turn to travel to Bethlehem” From my place on the tree, the room I survey Though he’s still sitting there, he’s on his way To watch over those he loves above all But, he’ll never forget what he saw in this ball.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/15/2014 9:48:00 PM
RICHARD, Congrats, with your EPIC CHRISTMAS is winning poem... TAKE CARE :) ~SKAT~
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Richard D Seal
Date: 2/6/2014 6:24:00 PM
Hiya Skat, this catching up is taking longer than I thought, don't ever give soup a break lol, Thanks for stopping by. Take care, Richard
Date: 1/3/2014 3:19:00 PM
touching melody, richard.. way to go.. sweet congrats!
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Richard D Seal
Date: 2/6/2014 6:22:00 PM
Hi Nette, Sorry for late reply just getting back into soup, thanks for the comment, like it. Take care, Richard
Date: 1/3/2014 1:09:00 PM
super story Richard congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 2/6/2014 6:20:00 PM
Hello again Linda, just catching up on my comments after being out a while and you're here again. Thanks very much. Take care, Richard
Date: 1/3/2014 4:27:00 AM
Enjoyed your epic poem and congrats on the win, Richard
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Date: 2/6/2014 6:18:00 PM
Hi Doc Thanks for dropping by with your congrats, Take care, Richard
Date: 1/3/2014 2:35:00 AM
My heartfelt congratulations my dear friend, Richard ! Biggest hugs! Thank you so much for your support. Happy, Happy New Year and Advance Happy Three Kings! love lots, Leonora
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Richard D Seal
Date: 2/6/2014 6:16:00 PM
Hi Leonora, I have been out of soup a while, just catching up, Thanks for the placement, much appreciated, I enjoyed writing this one. Take care, Richard
Date: 12/27/2013 10:48:00 AM
hey did this ever get entered into PD's Christmas contest? It's one of the best I saw for the season. A different kind of Xmas poem but I sure love it.
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Date: 12/30/2013 11:47:00 AM
Hiya Petal, No I didn't enter it in PDs, I put in Leonora's, I don't do many contests but this seemed to suit that one so had a go at it
Date: 12/25/2013 10:24:00 AM
An heartfelt Christmas story! Indeed you touched life with this nostagic quill! Bravo Richard!
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Richard D Seal
Date: 12/26/2013 7:44:00 PM
Thanks OA, much appreciate your comment, will be stopping by yours soon
Date: 12/23/2013 11:12:00 AM
This is a very touching write, Richard....So nostalgic...and...sad. I wonder at the inspiration behind this write. I read it a while back, but have come to add my voice to all those who have posted below in admiration of your work. Interesting work.
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Date: 12/26/2013 7:42:00 PM
Thank you Eileen, I was just sitting by the tree late one evening and wondered how many people will spend Christmas alone, and it spilled from there. There are so many great poets on this site, to be honest I'm humbled to be in their presence. Erm .. that includes you my dear.
Date: 12/22/2013 7:51:00 AM
- A enjoyable and beautiful Christmas story Richard! - Thanks for the many beautiful poems from you in 2013 - I greatly appreciate your poems and your visits to my poems. - I wish you and your loved ones a delightful Christmas - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard D Seal
Date: 12/26/2013 7:35:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise and likewise I have so enjoyed reading your work this last year and look forward to seeing many more
Date: 12/21/2013 6:04:00 PM
Richard....7 stars is not enough...You touched my heart.You are indeed an artist . Double fav's. Merry Christmas, chuck
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Date: 12/21/2013 6:49:00 PM
Thank you Chuck, I wanted this to touch people, if I have succeded in that I'm happy. I'll be round to see you again. If not before then Merry Christmas to you and yours
Date: 12/21/2013 9:06:00 AM
Nope, the bed I like on is not so cozy!!
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Richard D Seal
Date: 12/21/2013 6:45:00 PM
you know, I never read a poem once, always at least twice, sometimes more, till I can see the depth and reflections of the write.
Date: 12/21/2013 9:05:00 AM
WOW, this is not the ghost of christmas present at the end there. . I LOVE this one from you, Richard. Such nostalgia and sadness. And the perfect ending.
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Richard D Seal
Date: 12/21/2013 6:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Petal, I really appreciate your comments and your unwavering support, has meant a great deal to me.
Date: 12/21/2013 2:54:00 AM
Beautiful story, beautiful poem.... May all your days be merry and bright and may your Christmas be peaceful and white.... God Bless ..... Ellie
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Date: 12/21/2013 6:17:00 PM
Thank you Ellie and hello, I try to make all my days merry and bright and Christmas specially so, Merry Christmas to you.
Date: 12/20/2013 6:18:00 PM
You are always wonderful to me... Richard, I'm babbling from my phone. But I will be back on a later note to re-read the story above. hugs. .Linda
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Richard D Seal
Date: 12/21/2013 6:13:00 PM
My Sweet Dark Friend, you babble with the beauty of a mountain stream in springtime :) Flow my way anytime.

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