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The soft snow flakes fall gently coating the land which to white is turning. Trees brushed white stand gleaming as Christmas dawns with sunlight bursting. A hush settles as people start stirring emotions high, children in the snow delighting. Soft and pristine white as the wind sets it flurrying its touch a whisper as it brushes cheeks now settling. Magical flakes of pure white glistening and sparkling, while icicles translucent adorn trees decorating their branches and trunks with colour reflecting. The people filled with awe as Jesus they are welcoming. 11/25/2014 contest: A Christmas Snow

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Date: 12/26/2014 9:04:00 PM
SHADOW, Congratulations on your awesome "*Christmas Snow*" win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/21/2014 11:04:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Shadow! Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/19/2014 1:29:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your beautiful poem once again. It is nice to see it on the winner's list... Congrats to you, Shadow!
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Date: 12/18/2014 6:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem Shadow.
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Date: 12/14/2014 12:42:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/14/2014 12:00:00 AM
Beautiful. Congrats to you as well!
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Date: 12/13/2014 9:46:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Your poem encompasses all that winter snow makes us feel and appreciate at Christmas time. Well done x
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Date: 12/13/2014 8:52:00 AM
Hi Shadow, Nice pristine white poem with a very sound message. Congratulations on your win. Have a very Merry Christmas season. Earl
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Date: 12/12/2014 9:15:00 PM
congratulations on your win Shadow
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Date: 12/13/2014 1:16:00 AM
ty Robert festive greetings hugs
Date: 12/12/2014 8:53:00 PM
A magical poem well penned, congratulations on the win, Shadow
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Date: 12/13/2014 1:15:00 AM
ty dear Ram appreciated hugs
Date: 12/12/2014 8:08:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Happy Holidays Light & Love
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Date: 12/13/2014 1:14:00 AM
ty Debbie festive greetings hugs
Date: 12/12/2014 12:05:00 PM
This stands out ,congrats on the win Shadow...huggs
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Date: 12/13/2014 1:13:00 AM
ty so much Kayod hugs
Date: 11/29/2014 1:42:00 AM
Mother Nature certainly has her own wonderful way of decorating every winter season! ....This was a lovely write, Shadow. I enjoyed it so much! Good luck in Gail's contest!
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Date: 11/29/2014 5:15:00 AM
ty so much Kelly hugs
Date: 11/27/2014 9:28:00 AM
this presents the perfect "natural" picture of the holiday season. who can hate snow when it is drifting sofly on xmas eve? Even I like it at that moment (I just hate it when i have to drive to work in it). Very pretty, Shadow.
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Date: 11/27/2014 12:22:00 PM
ty Andrea I love snow when watching it through a window or the first falls that always delight as the world appears painted pure once more hugs
Date: 11/27/2014 6:38:00 AM
You have captured the magic of christmas in this one---Happy Holidays Shadow
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Date: 11/27/2014 12:20:00 PM
ty Jerry Happy Holidays to you also hugs
Date: 11/25/2014 3:30:00 PM
such wonderful imagery - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:49:00 PM
ty Jan hugs

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