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A Christmas Memory

Lights twinkle on gilded bows Brown eyes gleamed that silent night your first Christmas gift to me you were there, smiling. 11/22/15 James Inman

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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/2/2015 12:54:00 PM

Congratulations James.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/1/2015 8:10:00 PM

So very lovely, James. Truly touching. Congratulations! CayCay

Eve Roper

Date: 12/1/2015 7:43:00 PM

Beautiful! Congratulations on your win, James!

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/1/2015 4:46:00 PM

Such a lovely memory so nicely presented, James. Congratulations on your 1st Place win. Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2015 3:59:00 PM

this is fantastic . So simple and so elegant at the same time using the form you chose. Hello, my friend, and congratulations.

Dan Cwiak

Date: 12/1/2015 3:05:00 PM

Nicely done, James. Congrats on the win.

Skat A

Date: 12/1/2015 1:04:00 PM

James, Congratulations on your Christmas Memory win. Luv **SKAT**

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/1/2015 11:53:00 AM

- It is rare that I participate in anyone contest ...... however, this was so nice - Many great and some sad memories we shared - Congratulations with your poems, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

Date: 12/1/2015 9:21:00 AM

smileyyy :) Congrats on the win James :)

James Inman
Date: 12/1/2015 10:42:00 AM

RSSE, thank you for the visit and sweet comment.

Balveen Cheema

Date: 12/1/2015 3:07:00 AM

Congrats James on your first placement! You received the best gift then and now!

James Inman
Date: 12/1/2015 10:41:00 AM

And wonderful gifts they are, Balveen. Thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/1/2015 1:41:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats James:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman
Date: 12/1/2015 10:40:00 AM

Thank you Jan.

Viv Wigley

Date: 12/1/2015 1:22:00 AM

I love the warmth in this, and you did well as anticipated. Regards, Viv

James Inman
Date: 12/1/2015 10:39:00 AM

Hi Viv, thank you.

Susan Gentry

Date: 12/1/2015 1:05:00 AM

Congratulations! A great Dodoitsu from what I understand, lines of romance, syllables right, and made me smile also. Great memory and poem.

James Inman
Date: 12/1/2015 10:38:00 AM

Thank you for the wonderful comment Susan.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/30/2015 11:14:00 PM

Great imagery James.. congrats on top podium!

James Inman
Date: 12/1/2015 10:37:00 AM

Thank you so much Dr Sharma.

Emile Pinet

Date: 11/29/2015 12:39:00 PM

Wonderful imagery and depth to this piece. Beautiful! Emile.

James Inman
Date: 12/1/2015 10:36:00 AM

Thanks, Emile, for your always insightful comments.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/27/2015 1:49:00 AM

James I., wow that is so sweet James I. You got me at the right momentum! ~~Olive ELoisa

James Inman
Date: 11/27/2015 2:36:00 PM

Olive, you make my day, thank you.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/25/2015 11:36:00 PM

Excellent Dodoitsu. Good luck in the contest.

James Inman
Date: 11/26/2015 11:37:00 AM

Thank you Nayda.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/24/2015 9:42:00 PM

Such a wonderful gift you were given for Christmas... This is lovely poem for the contest, James. Good luck to you!

James Inman
Date: 11/25/2015 5:51:00 AM

Thank you Kelly. The best gift ever.

Viv Wigley

Date: 11/23/2015 12:46:00 AM

What a great memory, James. A lovely little piece. Should do well. Regards, Viv

James Inman
Date: 11/23/2015 9:20:00 AM

Thanks for the encouraging words.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/22/2015 10:51:00 AM

oh how romantic James good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7

James Inman
Date: 11/22/2015 12:01:00 PM

Thanks Jan