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A Christmas Callgirl

Everyone has gone home Where ever home is The city is bare Only me And the call girl left We share our secrets In silence Comrades in despair The cold winter chills us all So we two find comfort In a passing moment She kisses her past I kiss my desires Our tongues kiss our dreams A Christmas carol plays in the background Snow begins to fall Madeline must now go On another call

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/17/2014 7:20:00 PM

No one should be alone, this is touching in it's own way.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/17/2014 10:49:00 PM

Thank you Richard, that was the idea I was trying to convey.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/14/2014 8:47:00 PM

A pity She couldnt stay the night,and another night,and another-to fulfill his lonliness whilst erasing her own.A sad feeling lingers here Arthur.. Everyone needs to be loved.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/14/2014 9:13:00 PM

This is so true, and your comments explain what I was trying to convey, even I added a wee twist to it. In either case it was 2 lonely souls who in silence shared at least that bond.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/14/2014 7:18:00 PM

Very interesting work here my friend, but at least for that moment these two christmas spirits found comfort in each others arms, nice work Arthur and thanks for your comment on my ice angel write, cheri

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/14/2014 9:39:00 PM

thank you cherl

Tim Smith

Date: 12/13/2014 10:55:00 PM

A fabulous story of two lonely souls finding love in the night if only briefly

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/14/2014 9:38:00 PM

Yes, from the mouth of a true romantic!!!!! Cheers

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2014 8:52:00 PM

I enjoyed this one, Arthur. a very interesting one for the season. I like them different like this.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/14/2014 9:38:00 PM

If anything I try to be different! :) Hugs