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A Child's Prayer

Why twinkle twinkle little star. I hope someone, knows where you are. If you are lost and need a friend, I'll pray to God, so He will send A shooting star, to guide you home As you seem small like me, don't roam. Today i heard my father say, That stars live on the milky way So play where other stars will be They'll keep you safe, like mum does me. Twinkle twinkle tomorrow night I'll twinkle back by candle light Goodnight Godbless keep shining bright. Send me sweet dreams til morning light.

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Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/11/2015 1:59:00 PM

As sweet as can be. Congrats. BG

George Seal
Date: 7/15/2015 1:13:00 PM

Hi Barbara, thankyou so much for congratulating me on this poem. George

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/9/2015 7:54:00 PM

A blessing to read and remember. George, Congratulations In Kelly's "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" contest. ~LINDA~

George Seal
Date: 7/15/2015 2:00:00 PM

Hi LINDA, thankyou for reading sending me some very nice comments on my poem. Cheers. George

Skat A

Date: 5/9/2015 6:40:00 PM

George, Congrats on your Twinkle Little Star win. SKAT LOVE

George Seal
Date: 7/15/2015 5:14:00 PM

Hi Skat,thankyou once again for your congratulations on one of my poems. I do appreciate it and thank you for being so kind. George.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/9/2015 3:29:00 PM

this is charming - a lovely take on the rhyme - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

George Seal
Date: 7/15/2015 1:30:00 PM

Hello Jan, it's so good of you to makesome very nice comments on my poem. Thankyou. Cheers. George

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/9/2015 12:46:00 PM

I truly enjoyed this beautiful poem, George. The rhyming is perfect! Congrats on a win!

George Seal
Date: 7/15/2015 5:09:00 PM

Hi Kelly, thankyou for your most kind remarks on my poem. I am so glad you enjoyed it as much as i had composing it. Cheers. George.

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 4/27/2015 2:46:00 PM

Lovely take on this. I like that you kept the same structure and this could be sung to the song.~jan

George Seal
Date: 7/15/2015 1:26:00 PM

Hello Janet, i'll bet my bottom dollar,well it is sixty five new pence for me,that Lyric man has read your account of my poem. Thankyou for your very kind comments on the poem. Cheers. George