A Child's Idea of Christmas

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Just a thought a child might say about today.

Christmas Day is here. Jesus is here too. And, all I want to say, is Happy Birthday to You.

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Funom Makama

Date: 2/6/2016 8:39:00 AM

your words soften my heart like a damsel in need of a companion..... Your lines are sweeteners to a curious mind which is absolutely satisfied. There's this eagerness I have running to your pages and your reputation of meeting that expectation is beyond any form of appreciation or grading. Beyond 7 my friend!!

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/22/2016 2:32:00 AM

The child sees the bottomline...good one, Marilyn!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2015 5:37:00 PM

happy birthday indeed! I want to Wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Jan Allison

Date: 12/25/2015 5:15:00 PM

oh this is delightful Marilyn! hope you had a wonderful day:-) hugs Jan xx