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A Child's Christmas

Bubble lights 'pon the Christmas tree A little girl watches Bubble lights placed on lower limbs Illuminates branches Fasination captivates child A bright smile glows 'pon face Seconds, minutes, and hours pass by As she sits still in place Soft glow of yellow light surrounds The memory hazy White Angel Hair blocks the clear view Seems she holds a daisy Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton Contest: A Child's Christmas Written: December 29, 2013

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/9/2014 4:01:00 PM

A lovely poem of Christmas, written through the eyes of a child. Some of our most treasured memories were made at Christmastime! Nicely done, Sara! Congratulations on your win, as well!

Kelly Zakerski

Date: 1/8/2014 5:39:00 AM

Sara - Love the poem - what memories.... congratulations on your win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/7/2014 1:38:00 AM

Congratulations Sara love xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/7/2014 1:03:00 AM

Nice write full of Christmas spirit and congrats on the fine win, sara

Roger Horsch

Date: 1/6/2014 7:06:00 PM

You just keep writing the good ones Sara, That's why I love to read them. Congrats on your win...Hugs....Roger

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/6/2014 6:56:00 PM

Yes Sara I'm with Joe short but sweet and thanks for the memory of that angel hair! I had forgotten all about that Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Joseph May

Date: 1/6/2014 6:31:00 PM

wonderful work Sara...congrats on your win

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/6/2014 5:36:00 PM

There are many hear who have probably never seen bubble lights. Thanks for the trip down memory lane. Congrats.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 1/6/2014 12:29:00 PM

so sweet Sara lovely write congrats on placing ty too for your support Shadow x smile hug

Jack Horne

Date: 1/1/2014 1:58:00 PM

beautiful write, my friend - sure to be a winner

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 12/31/2013 9:56:00 AM

This is a great poem for the contest, Thanks for sharing. Have a blessed new year.... Lucilla

Len Gasun

Date: 12/31/2013 12:34:00 AM

Another very beautiful poem which I thoroughly enjoyed reading it today my dear friend Sara. Thank u so much for sharing some of your precious gems today. I'll come back to read more. Good luck in the contest and in everything. Thank u so much also for your precious time reading my poem. Again, Happy New Year! love lots, Leonora

Kelly Deschler

Date: 12/30/2013 3:34:00 PM

I love bubble lights, there is just something so magical about them! I really enjoyed this enchanting poem, Sara! Wonderful work! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for your kind visits. I hope that you had a great Christmas, and I wish you all the best for the New Year!

Roger Horsch

Date: 12/30/2013 9:39:00 AM

You write so well Sara, I always love to visit. A very good poem....Hugs...Roger

Brian Strand

Date: 12/30/2013 2:45:00 AM

Thank you Sara for your comments.A blessed 2014 to you.Rgds Brian

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/29/2013 11:31:00 PM

a moment divine, sara... love the rhythm of your work... huggs and happy new year!

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/29/2013 9:34:00 PM

You have written an exceptional write here my friend! I enjoyed how you composed this poem, a perfect 8/6/8/6 syllable count with excellent rhyming lines! And this is one of you tenderest poems, full of gentle lightness within the child's love! All as seen by anyone who can see this masterful descriptive view! What a brilliant piece Sara, Great Work!!