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A Childs Aventure

Racing down the stairs ready for the day's adventures in a hurry to get outside mother making me eat first I bolt my food as fast as possible then flee outside and down the road stopping at Bobby's on the way his mother telling us behave Together we head for the woods right deep into its heart there a large tree stood with branches hanging low We climbed up to our tree house checked around, then settled down would today be the day we thought eyes fixed fast on a falcon's nest They should be due to hatch now a cluster of three eggs in nest look says Bobbie there is a crack sure enough he was right Fascinated we watched the chick hatch struggling to break free of its shell wet and sticky looking very bedraggled to us lads it was the most beautiful sight

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Date: 12/4/2013 3:37:00 AM
kids really have more options to be natural and be with nature.As grown ups we are used to be proactive and nothing is real.Apart from all these loving and admiring nature is a big skill.Wonderful shadow. A beautiful poem. (: ) Jenish.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/6/2013 7:31:00 PM
hi Jenish nice of you to stop by glad you like it ty Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/3/2013 6:39:00 PM
So sweet Shadow. I enjoyed!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/6/2013 10:44:00 PM
Hugs back.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/6/2013 7:30:00 PM
tnx Rick Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/1/2013 10:13:00 AM
Fun adventurous verse! Shadow! Jimbo
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Date: 12/1/2013 11:57:00 AM
hi Jimbo it was fun to write ty Shadow x smile hugs
Date: 12/1/2013 9:29:00 AM
very beautiful piece linda dear friend
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