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A Child Still Trembles

A man within the wood becomes a child With brutal bruises on his broken soul In frenzied foment running wretched wild Until full fragmentation of his whole. Each stuttered step brings terror deep within But takes him to the center of the wood Where trees become embodiment of sin And speak in timbered tones not understood. The purpose of the pace he chose to take Is vague in all its vast complexity But clarity of memories now make Him face a frightened child's reality; A worn and wasted shadow-land unknown Where there a child still trembles all alone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/26/2010 3:56:00 AM
Hi Ruben and thank you very much. I am most honored my friend. tom Hi Wayne. Thank you so much for the read and review. tom Hi Carol and thank you. tom Hello Paula and thank you so much. tom Hi Doris and thank you so much. tom Thank you Dr. Metha. Most honored. tom
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:26:00 PM
Nicely Done Tom; Dark, wonderful imagery. Wayne
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Date: 9/29/2010 12:07:00 PM
I am happy to be able to sit and read all the diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad your poetry was among the ones I am reading today Tom. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:14:00 AM
not only a well structured sonnet, you have created a dark and sinister piece, which I read twice just to digest fully, you leave the reader with just enough information to understand the context but leaving us wanting to know more about this person and his situation..great poem
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Date: 9/29/2010 5:20:00 AM
sad and terror filled work... well written!
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Date: 9/29/2010 5:11:00 AM
Very creative and very deep with meanings, tom
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