Home » Poems » Cecilia Macfarlane » A Chef's Surprise

A Chef's Surprise

Yummy A mouthwatering buffet that makes you drool Getting sick from food poisoning is not so cool Yucky April 8, 2020 Let the Pens Flow - Antonym Poetry Contest Sponsored by Jenish Somadas

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/5/2020 6:41:00 AM

Yucky indeed. ;0)

Silent One

Date: 10/26/2020 4:23:00 PM

Hey... You've not written in so long . Hope you post again soon..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/23/2020 7:03:00 AM

Yucky for sure but your poem is great!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/22/2020 7:51:00 PM

Cecelia, this is EXCELLENT! Janice

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/22/2020 7:57:00 PM

Thanks Janice. Hugs

J.W. Earnings

Date: 4/13/2020 2:53:00 PM

I like this silly and clever poem about the sickening feeling of food poisoning. I have had experiences with that before...

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/22/2020 7:56:00 PM

Thanks J.W. Hopefully we both never get food poisoning again. Hugs

J.W. Earnings
Date: 4/13/2020 2:54:00 PM

Overall, very good poetry! I like the contrast between a good experience with food and a bad one.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/13/2020 2:15:00 PM

Very clever write, and I know the feeling - got food poisoning by the coast last year in one of the best restaurants in Umhlanga with Oysters - in agony with pain and continual nausea! Blessings, Jennifer.

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/22/2020 7:55:00 PM

Thanks Jennifer. Yes, I had shellfish food poisoning, it's so awful. Hugs

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 4/13/2020 12:52:00 AM

nice... lovely penning

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/13/2020 12:09:00 PM

Thank you Mahtab. Hugs

Silent One

Date: 4/12/2020 3:43:00 PM

Ha... Good one!

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/13/2020 12:07:00 PM

Thank you S.O. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2020 4:41:00 PM

this was a really cute way to do the challenge!

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/13/2020 12:07:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. Hugs

Joseph May

Date: 4/9/2020 8:51:00 AM

Food can bring both delight and fright, Nicely done Cecilia..

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/9/2020 10:33:00 AM

Yes, food poisoning is something I wouldn't want to experience again. Thank you Joseph. Hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/9/2020 6:48:00 AM

A poem we can all relate to--apt for the theme--wonderfully executed, Cecilia. All the best.

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/9/2020 10:30:00 AM

I had food poisoning from shellfish once, so horrible. Thank you Vijay. Hugs

Caycay Jennings

Date: 4/8/2020 6:07:00 PM

Even the yucky in your poem was lovely as it fit so perfectly. Yours is the first I've seen other than my hand scrawled one and I'm glad to see you formatted your poem just as I thought I would. I enjoyed your creative antonym expression! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/8/2020 6:51:00 PM

Happy you enjoyed reading. Thank you CayCay. Hugs