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A Change of Seasons

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A Change of Seasons

Persuaded by time, clothed in rust, night reveals a lonely Halloween... Illusions of my childhood drift away with falling leaves

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  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:59:00 AM
    Hey Carrie me too about the nature of the pivot in tanka it is similiar to the cut..the related but step away movement in scene or thought in haiku, thank Su for bringing the poetic vehicle to out attention! HUGS HUGS Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 8:24:00 PM
    Carrie, Belated congrats on your well deserved win!

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:19:00 PM
    Contest results .... you won, congratulations. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:17:00 PM
    this is fantabulous, CArrie. So good to see one of your poems on a winners' list. I have not seen you much lately. A most well deserved win!

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 5:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 4:47:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Carrie I love the way this finishes the last two lines are brilliant xx

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 11:53:00 PM

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 6:47:00 PM
    Carrie, CONGRATULATIONS !!! :-) enjoyed your wonderful poem in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest... take care~xox~PD

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 5:24:00 PM
    Great creative work..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 7:41:00 AM
    Beautiful tanka! those 2 last lines - so powerful and sad...good luck in the contest :)

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 8:05:00 AM
    Hi Carrie - Such a unique look at life's seasons is a delight. Kathy

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 4:34:00 AM
    A lovely poem Carrie. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 10:08:00 PM
    Hullo, Carrie. Tanka that employ memories, illusion thereof, etc, are great -- just as this tanka of yours is.

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 8:11:00 PM
    ‡ Seasons Change, Like A Song From 'Expose' Back In The 80's, Dear Beautiful Carrie. Time Does Often Reveal Things We Once Thought Not. Homecoming Has Always Brought About These Beautiful Images Of Queens. You Are So Gifted. So Very Rare. So Beautiful. Have A Joyful Evening, And I Loved Your Poem. Love, Rachel ‡

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 6:27:00 PM
    Lovely tanka. Color, motion and a touch of emotion.