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A Change of Heart

A drop of water fell on me not one, but two, then three... Ready to curse the skies and Thee in barehead selfishness, admittedly When a blade of grass came up to me with his heartfelt, poignant plea 'Without water, Sir, you see I simply no longer will be' My eyelids wet, but not from rain I put him down on my lawn again Lifted my hands, my palms spread wide 'Let the heavens gush forth,' my joyful cry

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Date: 4/18/2024 9:08:00 PM
Your Authentic self shows through your heart with your writing ??. I read quite a few of your poems. Some brought tears to my eyes, your work deeply touched my heart.. Thank you for connecting. I need good people in my life as well..
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/18/2024 9:25:00 PM
Thank you so much for the heartfelt comment, Cat. Wishing you Light and Illumination, Gershon
Date: 11/9/2022 5:29:00 AM
Gershon, just beautiful! I love to see this side of you! Happy Wednesday with a tear ( of joy!)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/9/2022 9:19:00 AM
Whoa, you went back in time for this one, Mike. Thank you!!! 'Course, the flip side is --- nothing much worthwhile in the last 31 days. Heh-heh. I'll keep trying though... Have a picturesque Wednesday, sir!
Date: 10/10/2022 6:46:00 AM
A fav for me gw. Sweet! laf
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/9/2022 9:21:00 AM
Thanks for the fav, laf. Really appreciate it. Raindrops and lollipops, gw
Date: 10/9/2022 8:27:00 PM
What may not be of benefit to some is life-giving to others. A beautiful couplet; thank you, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/9/2022 9:28:00 AM
Can't ask for a lovelier, more insightful comment. Truly appreciated, Shirley!
Date: 10/9/2022 5:40:00 PM
A favorite my friend. Outstanding Gershon. Love this one...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/9/2022 9:22:00 AM
Thank you so much for the 'favorite' ranking -- from one of my all-time favorite commenters, Michael. ~ Playing favorites (Hey, I used to be a teacher; goes with the territory, although most will deny it).
Date: 10/9/2022 12:58:00 PM
Ah, thanks, gw, for this one. YES! What displeases us may be another's lifeline.
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Date: 10/9/2022 5:58:00 AM
Excellent point in this poem. I love it. A Fave for me. Thanks for sharing Gershon :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/9/2022 9:29:00 AM
Heidi, thank you so much for the FAVE. It's taken me a whole month to calm down from my excitement about it, as you can see. (Today is 11/9). Keep smiling, gw
Date: 10/8/2022 11:02:00 PM
When something becomes a matter of survival for one, we have to allow it though it may cause us a temporary inconvenience. Without rain and water a small weed or grass cannot survive. Love the message, this poem embodies!
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Date: 10/8/2022 9:50:00 PM
:) they do like the rain ... or they or nature plants wither
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Date: 10/8/2022 9:44:00 PM
Seeing life through the eyes of another, whether a person or thing, is an experience of enlightenment. Feeling remorse and acting upon it, is love. Your heart is showing through your poetry, my dear friend. Write On! Bill
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/9/2022 9:30:00 AM
Uh-oh. My heart is showing again. At least last time it was on my sleeve. In my poetry is a better cover for lub-dub. Smiles for miles, gw

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