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A Chance For Redemption

A Chance For Redemption By Jeff Weiner Worms and roaches crawl on me Where am I at, Musty odor ovecomes me Feeling cold and trapped, No room to move, air is thin No light or sound to be had, How did I get in this place Was I really that bad, Buried alive it seems Thoughts are getting faint, Trying to scratch my way out Stuck in this lonely restraint, Light flashing before my eyes Wings and a hand appear, Take hold if you want true happiness Guiding over others so they wont end up here

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Date: 3/24/2010 8:32:00 AM
Excellent write Jeffrey - Your imagery is second to none - Thanks for sharing -:)
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