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A Canopy of Green

The gurgling water laughs out loud, trickling over rocks in a brook. Away from the bustle and crowd, the gurgling water laughs out loud. And flows along fields freshly plowed, maintaining its natural look. The gurgling waters laugh out loud trickling over rocks in a brook. Maintaining its natural look adds serenity to the scene near a boardwalk time forsook, maintaining its natural look. And sunbeams paint a dappled nook under a canopy of green. Maintaining its natural look, adds serenity to the scene. Under a canopy of green, shifting shadows subdue sunlight. And everything seems so serene under a canopy of green. Dreams go where fantasies have been, as imagination takes flight. Under a canopy of green, shifting shadows subdue sunlight. (Triple Triolet) 3/17/2015

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/25/2018 8:15:00 PM

Your triolet is beautifully executed. I love your first line "the gurgling waters laugh out loud". We almost want to laugh along because, phonetically the word GURGLING is plain funny. Lovely, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/26/2018 8:19:00 AM

Thanks so much Line, I do so appreciate your visits. Emile.

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/10/2015 10:11:00 PM

Love the imagery in this, Emile! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/11/2015 9:52:00 AM

Thanks Kim, I appreciate all your support. Emile.

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2015 3:02:00 PM

Emile, A lovely win, Love **SKAT**

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/7/2015 7:09:00 PM

Thanks SKAT, as always your comments are most welcome. Emile.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2015 2:06:00 PM

Emile, Congrats on your win. Always ~LINDA~

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/7/2015 2:29:00 PM

Thanks Linda, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/7/2015 8:06:00 AM

I like the use of repetition. Congratulations!

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/7/2015 9:36:00 AM

Thanks Richard, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/7/2015 3:50:00 AM

Wonderful triolet Emile! Congrats on ur win!

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/7/2015 9:37:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Sharma, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/21/2015 7:38:00 PM

Oh I want to see GREEN LOL it snowed all day yesterday & this morning BUT it did warm up & most is melted now! Light & Love Emile

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/22/2015 12:40:00 PM

Thanks Debbie, like you I am so looking forward to green. Emile.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/18/2015 8:50:00 AM

I love your repeating first line on your first set. :) triolet is one of my fave forms but I did it just once. :)! I like the imagery you put me into. I feel rested and refreshed.. :)!//olive eloisa

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/18/2015 9:13:00 AM

Thanks so much Olive, I appreciate it. Emile.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/18/2015 12:01:00 AM

I just liked the poem, but reading the comments below, yes I see how you did this, great!!!!!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/18/2015 12:00:00 AM

Beautiful, and I sure cant wait for spring!!!

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/18/2015 9:14:00 AM

Thanks Arthur, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2015 3:58:00 PM

wow, it's very interesting how you used the one line from the middle part to make the first line of the next one. Is that what it means to "triple it?" I can see Francine likes it because she is asking for the date, and you got the date on it. Good. It's gonna do well! I just love triolet form

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/17/2015 4:23:00 PM

Thanks Andres, yes that is how you link a Triolet. Glad you enjoyed it. Emile.

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/17/2015 2:11:00 PM

psst, date written on the entry please

Jan Allison

Date: 3/17/2015 12:09:00 PM

I struggle to write one - you have written three delightful triolets - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/17/2015 12:57:00 PM

Thanks Jan, I look forward to reading yours. Emile.