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A Candle On the Sea

For you I'll make an ocean Where you'll never have to hide I'll fill it with devotion And pour love upon the tide For you these waters bide... The waves they will embrace you On that warm supporting sea The current, it will guide you through And bring your flame to me The things you always wanted...you will see

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Pete Yuhas

Date: 1/3/2016 1:44:00 PM

Very nice write Nigel, hope the New Year brings many more. Pete Yuhas

Nigel Fawcett
Date: 1/3/2016 1:48:00 PM

Thank you Pete for your kind words. Happy New Year.. Nigel

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 11/20/2008 9:31:00 PM

Oh my my, this is so romantic! So much love in there. I agree with all, lucky lady:) Very touchy. Love, Chitra

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/20/2008 5:33:00 PM

You have such a sweet romantic side! Lucky lady out there, my, oh, my! ~ Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/20/2008 4:59:00 PM

You are making someone feel very happy. I sense a special kind of love in the air. : ) I don't blame her, this beautiful write shows what a giving, caring soul you are. Truly heartwarming. Love, Shar

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/20/2008 4:22:00 PM

Perfect poem..I had a bad afternoon and this has made me cry...your woman is so lucky..BG

Christopher Higgins

Date: 11/20/2008 3:59:00 PM

I love the ending of this poem Nigel. The promise that must be kept...letting them know if they take a chance it will all workout. Beautiful write Nigel.