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A Candle In the Dark

A Candle in the dark I could not see A hand holding, Could not hear A voice calling, But I was cold, And sore for sight, Was old Long tired of night And any spark would do If in passing by chance Was left A glow of You. A candle in the dark No fancy cradle Or proper handle for holding-- Not the slightest flutter of Angel wings Or strum of harps, Reverent chant rising From mysterious Cloaked beings-- But always I have Sensed Your warmth, Safe suspension somewhere Holding me And anywhere will do Because somehow I know At least One supporting air Is You-- A candle in the dark-- All warranties expired None having ever Been guarantees; No sound trade-in For newer model, Too few years left For loan-paying, My little-light dimming As The Thief With illumination in his pocket Slips silently away As Time Camouflaged as living Leaves me where I started But never doubting In the end To be led Safely home By Your loving candle Out of my dark….

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Date: 10/23/2023 7:35:00 AM
As I browsed, I came across this older poem. It's a wonderful poem but sad. So well written, I did want to give it praise.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/23/2023 8:23:00 AM
Thank you, Hilda; you made my day. Blessings!
Date: 8/19/2016 6:54:00 PM
Great write Joe! I really like how your words fall off the tongue and how your train of thought illuminates the metaphor all the way to the end. :)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/22/2023 6:25:00 PM
Thank you, Ryan; blessings my friend.
Date: 6/1/2016 4:11:00 AM
Sweetly inspirational! I enjoyed ! Aloha,Cheryl
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/1/2016 4:46:00 AM
Thank you so much, Cheryl; have a beautiful day!

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