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A Candle

A candle left lighting through the dark, lighting in our land, dearly it mourns you. A candle left as it lies by your body, seduced by your ode futile to tame it's light solid, illumes the crossed fingers entwined. date: 11/3/2012 craig cornish contest: Loss

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Date: 2/18/2016 1:46:00 AM
LOVELY IMAGERY
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Date: 11/30/2015 12:28:00 PM
Johan, Enjoyed reading.... LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 11/10/2012 4:51:00 AM
Very well written Johan! The image of the candle solidifies the theme of loss. Nice!
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Johan Poet
Date: 11/12/2012 5:16:00 PM
thanks vicky ;)
Date: 11/7/2012 1:26:00 PM
yes it is Anne,great write Johan,best wishes in the contest
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Johan Poet
Date: 11/8/2012 5:04:00 PM
thanks ;)
Date: 11/3/2012 4:47:00 PM
A deep poem Johan . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Johan Poet
Date: 11/5/2012 6:02:00 PM
thank you, have a nice day :)

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