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A Camera's Eye

How deftly my camera seduces this chance If circumstance allotted, or thus, I knew somehow Could earn the winsome smile, or to steal his favored glance To apprehend and keep the promised vow Captivate his warrant, or a furrow of his brow So safely captured within the frame If once, I knew, he'd look my way just now, And fondly gaze at me , with eyes the camera claims ~ A cloud appears, the shutter snaps And though his smile was long A raindrop falls, the thunder claps… Too soon the moment gone, The rain pours down, he runs for cover My fleeting chance is over Inspired by Dr. Ram's contest Spenserian Sonnet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/16/2011 3:55:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie. I always enjoy your work. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/16/2011 12:32:00 PM
I liked your best ;) yup I did! Congrad's on this evocative win! Light & Love Read my verse In the Blink of an Eye, please. Light & Love
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Date: 3/16/2011 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations in the contest of Dr. Ram Mehta "The Spenserian Sonnet" Carrie. A well deserved winner. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/15/2011 9:41:00 PM
Kudos Carrie for big win in Dr Ram's Spenserian contest with this creative piece. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 3/15/2011 10:56:00 AM
Delighted to see your poem in the winners' circle, Carrie. I remember this one well as it was so unique and compelling. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/15/2011 8:49:00 AM
Awesome to see you in the top ten Carrie. Congratulations on your quite worthy poem's honored seventh place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/15/2011 8:32:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your spectacular win in Dr. Ram's Sonnet contest with these elegant lines of your entry my friend... beautiful as always from your creative pen.. enjoy..
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Date: 3/15/2011 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations on the seventh place win in my contest, Carrie
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Date: 2/14/2011 11:53:00 AM
This poem is absoluetly breathless in his beauty, this is a slice of life, put to words, best of luck in the contest~~
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Date: 2/14/2011 8:34:00 AM
a tremendous other-side perspective of a weather that seems to have a mind of its own... so crisp with a lively tone to it! here's to winning wishes for you! :) hugggs, nette
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Date: 2/13/2011 2:34:00 PM
Wonderful story so well described in your beautiful words...love Michael
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Date: 2/13/2011 1:55:00 PM
Ah, the weather is the third intrusive character. Very creative, Carrie. Great sonnet. Your vivid description allowed us to see this event unfold. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, carolyn
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Date: 2/13/2011 1:49:00 PM
wow, Carrie, another coincidence.I too used the elements of love feeling, rain and chance meeting in my entry! Love the sound of this one and the "focus" on that camera. Great job!! soupmail
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Date: 2/13/2011 1:04:00 PM
Thanks for participating in my contest, Carrie
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