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A Call From Hell

I stood in the check out line of a grocery store. Thinking of last nights events that still shakes me to the core.... I felt I was being buried alive in a dark tomb. I awoke with a start with a pounding heart and looked about the room. Beads of perspiration trickled down my chest. My eyes bulged like a man possessed. I felt sick like I was going to vomit. The nightmare frightened me more than I like to admit. A strong sense of deja vu I couldn't quite understand. I was startled by the ring of my cellphone on the nightstand. The static was drowning out the callers voice and what he was tryng to say. The in and out of the voice sounded so far away. I listened closely trying to hear and understand what he was saying, for it was clearly a man. He was asking me for help because he could not escape the place he was in. He said the place was so hot the flames were burning off his skin! I was about to hang up because obviously this guy was ill; But within the next minute I would get an eternal chill. A frightening look could be seen in my eyes! I felt the hair on the back of my neck rise. He kept repeating my name like he knew me personally. I then recognized his voice immediately! "Oh my this can't be so!" It was the voice of my late friend who died three years ago!!! Written for "A Rambling Poet's contest "Act 1, Scene 1"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/6/2010 2:54:00 PM
this is well written
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Date: 3/3/2010 1:45:00 PM
This is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for your comment about my poem. That's is quite and eerie feeling. To personally have that type of experience would be torture and a learning experience at the same time. Simply, "GET SAVED!". Great piece. Oh, and congratulations on your placement in the contest. It was intense and colourful from start to finish. Also, Audrey, thank you for sending the message on. I always need that extra encouragement with my writing.
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Date: 3/2/2010 2:51:00 PM
Hi, Jimmy. First of all I thank you for your comments, second, wow! Your piece gave me goose bumps. I've seen a movie when I was a child I think it was from a Hitchcock series where the character was receiving phone calls and could hear nothing... the movie ended by showing the telephone wires fallen because of the storm ...and the other end was stuck in the grave of his or her deceased loved one. Spooky :) Love, Iolanda
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Date: 3/1/2010 5:24:00 PM
Like I said, already a mini movie, JAM....Great job as usual. Congratulations on your win in A Rambling Poet's sponsored contest! XOXOX....Peanut butter
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Date: 3/1/2010 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ARPoet's "Act One Scene One" Contest ~Jimmy~. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2010 7:21:00 PM
Congrats Jimmy on your winning poem in the Act 1 Scene 1 contest.. an amazing write and a wonderful win for u to enjoy.. luv.. "Sweetheart" of P.S. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/22/2010 10:39:00 AM
This is already a short film, Jimmy!! You're such a great story teller. Can't wait to read your first novel!! Extraordinary talent... You know i love your stories..goes to my favs! Peanut butter
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