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A California Peach

He was laboriously looking for that one perfect peach with soft salubrious skin, radiantly rounded with robust, rubicund curves, crying to be caressed, coddled and cuddled. Her bashfully blushing rosy red cheeks on pale peach skin immediately caught his attention as she sat right there for the picking! Oh, to kiss those juicy joyful lovely lips, again and again! She stood out among her friends who were gathered in hues of green. . . For she was ruddy, regal and romantically ripe--his type! Her body sweetly, softly stimulating, and so tantalizingly tender to the touch; Her sensual scent, pure peach! When he held her in his arms and she coyly conversed, he had vestige visions of copious cobbler on his mind!

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Date: 3/25/2020 8:11:00 PM
Ah, Connie I enjoyed the ride on the time machine back 10 years to see this poetic peach with its alluring alliteration and sexy sensuality! Wonderful write, my poetic friend ~ John
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/26/2020 2:05:00 AM
Thank you John. I am glad you enjoyed it. xxoo
Date: 10/23/2012 2:49:00 PM
cONNIE, my poem to Amichai is written by me in honor and memory of this fine poet...
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Date: 9/13/2010 6:56:00 PM
Ah! Such wonderful, sensual alliteration. I love peaches ;) Just beautiful! Congratulations!! Hugs, Kris
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Date: 9/9/2010 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations Connie on your win in Linda Marie's contest "Luscious Love Lingers"Alliteration. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/8/2010 6:18:00 PM
Mmmmm.....peachy keen cobbler!! Loved your poem which is just as tasty!! Congratulations, Connie!
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Date: 9/7/2010 10:13:00 PM
congratulations, connie, on your AWESOME win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/7/2010 9:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest with this great entry, super job in writing this difficult form.. Love Constance
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Date: 9/6/2010 5:50:00 PM
this is wonderful, congrats on your win. Harry
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Date: 9/6/2010 7:35:00 AM
Congrats Connie on your big win in my LLL Alliteration contest... a wonderful write and win... enjoy and thankxxx for the information.. will attend to it this coming week luv..
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Date: 9/3/2010 12:37:00 PM
Connie, you excel ... awesomely provocative, and sensuously rich ... a good write.
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Date: 9/2/2010 8:28:00 PM
Delightful and mouthwatering write for the contest. Best wishes for your success in the contest. love and best wishes always....Ravindra......Connie M Wong
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Date: 9/1/2010 3:23:00 PM
An Alliteration Achieved Amazingly Because of Beautiful Connie :)
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Date: 9/1/2010 3:13:00 AM
hum! Too cool Con-nie, your Alliteration convocation, not on vacation. Smile! Thanks for your comments, they are important to me. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/1/2010 2:59:00 AM
A delightful poem - I shall never eat a peach again in the same way! Brill! Liz
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Date: 9/1/2010 1:10:00 AM
Hi dear Connie :) Linda sure is getting wonderful entries for her contest! I think you did great with this juicy & peachy write of yours--I hope this places high!! hugs nikko :)
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Date: 9/1/2010 12:20:00 AM
oh la la I adore this style of write ...really good write xx thank you for your comment on my win love sarah x
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Date: 8/31/2010 10:44:00 PM
connie, you really outdid yourself here. This is so cool. And wow, I loved that last line!! Food as sex. haha. If Linda doesn't like this one mucho, my radar must be really off! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/31/2010 6:52:00 PM
Outstanding Alliteration, Connie. Great imagery. Excellent entry. Good luck. Thanks for your kind words. aloha, Ralph
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Date: 8/31/2010 6:48:00 PM
Pretty allegory here! Thanks you for your kind words! Peaace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/31/2010 3:52:00 PM
A pleasure to read..another side of you, Connie. Always great poetry. Peace, love, Audrey P.S. Thanks for the comments.
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Date: 8/31/2010 12:43:00 PM
Did you win him over~also great imagery!!~very nice Connie!!!Thank you for your inspiring comments!!God bless~Rick
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Date: 8/31/2010 11:59:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Connie. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2010 7:05:00 AM
Connie what an excellent entry for Linda's contest.. :) Best of luck to you, love Wilma
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Date: 8/31/2010 4:32:00 AM
Great write for the contest!! must be a winner!! well done!
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Date: 8/31/2010 3:05:00 AM
Very interesting write on california peach. I enjoted it in 2005 When i was in Los Angeles to earn my degree of Litt.D. Of course, the actual peach not the peach you are talking about
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