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A Bully Tale

FIVE FABULOUS FUN FOOTLES A Bully Tale Pay me Says he I'm broke No joke! One look Shoes took Can’t run He won! 10/25/16

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/5/2016 9:39:00 AM

Footles so fine upon the winners’ list is awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2016 5:20:00 PM

ahhh, too bad you missed one footle. This was dang good. Congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2016 1:53:00 PM

- ........ and you won :) - Congrats on your great second place in the contest, Betty - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/30/2016 1:47:00 PM

Great string of footles Betty unfortunately you were one stanza short. many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Betty Janko
Date: 10/30/2016 5:54:00 PM

I do wish I looked more carefully when I edited it. The first one had 5 stanzas but it was not funny enough, so I re-did it and accidentally dropped one. My bad, it was supposed to have one "mis-spoke,tooth broke" but it disappeared! OOPS! Betty