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A Brutal World

I’m stumbling through a clouded forest …. While lying silently in my bed Fighting for every ounce of courage - trying to clear my head There are many questions I ask myself - Before walking out the door In order to be assured - I’ll make it home once more Should I continue to pretend - That everything’s ok. Put a smile across this face - and head out for my day Or should I in my pain admit: “It’s all too much for me” “I’ve grown tired of wandering through a world - Filled with such brutality ”

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Date: 6/18/2023 4:04:00 AM
Wonderful poem Darrell! Its so hard to put our “its ok” face on for the outside world! I really felt your poem…..Debx
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Darrell Rose
Date: 6/19/2023 1:03:00 AM
Thank you for the kind comment! Yes, sometimes I do wonder how we can go on acting as if things are ok. The current conflicts within our society are unsustainable. But …. “Smile… everything will be ok !” Have a great day ! Darrell

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