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A Brothers Forgiveness

On a journey down the mile A priest knelt down in prayer “Our father help me guide this lost soul To your loving embrace That you may be his last judge His stain of death will mark him So that you might welcome him his return home imminent …….Amen” The priest continued on his way Heavy of heart .. his horror of what lay ahead marking his face nearing the cell He pauses The hardest part lay before him The warden appearing pulls him aside … ” Keep him calm with your gibberish father We’ll do the rest “ Cold Grey walls surround him silver bars The only splash of light or shine Prison a hellish place to live Let alone die Blah blah blah the warden rambling on his voice fading Nothing of the tragedy The Killing time to come Oh the horror in the knowing The hour of our death Arriving at their destination The warden steps back wanting no part of what was next Metal bars swing back revealing a man of mammoth proportions needle worn skin a moving picture of colour “Hello Brother “ The priest freezes in time before him a brother lost found Oh Lord only to loose him again Desperation horror madness All cross the priest’s face “Why ?” says the priest “Though we don’t share belief or lifestyle I love you brother .. I ask your forgiveness for your compassion My blood flows through your veins Much as they say god flows through yours I only ask for a brothers forgiveness That i may meet my death Having made my peace with my blood” For a time silence Bile rising in the back of his throat The priest fighting for composure Steels himself .. “As a priest I forgive you As your brother I grieve for you” Reaching for his brother Arms like logs wrap round the priest Sobbing for what could have beens The brothers sat like this till … Time was called

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/13/2009 8:33:00 AM
A powerful piece of writing here. It makes me as a member of society take a look at justice from both perspectives. Congratulations on a well-deserved feature. God bless! - Milt
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Date: 9/10/2009 7:37:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 9/8/2009 6:14:00 PM
Jayne - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj
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Date: 9/8/2009 2:10:00 PM
Jane, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 9/7/2009 3:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Jayne, excellent reward for an excellent poem>>James
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Date: 9/7/2009 7:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Jayne. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2009 7:39:00 AM
Very detailed telling with gripping lines that hold the reader to th end ... he begs for more ... time was called ... there will be other writes to read. You are indeed a genius, O may I call you friend?
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Date: 5/15/2009 6:16:00 PM
Thank you so much ... I will certainly read more of your poetry love what I've read so far ... And i will certainly find your blog though I am still learning to navigate the site so if i dont find it soon someone send out a search party lol ... Love and Light God Bless Jayne "let me be a guiding light in your endless night of darkness when all others go out"
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Date: 5/15/2009 4:56:00 PM
This piece is well composed. This is the type situation when we pray for the souls so that forgiveness will shine with mercy. Situations such as this is unfortunate. However, if you would also like to read some uplifting and inspirational pieces, check out my "2009 Best Christian Poetry Award" blog on site regarding my book. Great job and God bless always! ~Joseph
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