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A Broken Vessel

A BROKEN VESSEL a broken vessel mended with due elements original's lost

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/12/2014 11:42:00 AM

.... such a shame .... the original is the best - Well dome my friend,Bl - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/12/2014 11:52:00 AM

- So true !!!!

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/12/2014 11:45:00 AM

Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your comment. If heart is once broken, that can't be mended and original aura is lost. Loved always,bl

David Meade

Date: 12/12/2014 9:05:00 AM

Nicely done, vessel repaired but not quite the same, lost the innocence of the content, filled again but lost is the original. Lovely my dear friend.

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/12/2014 9:12:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always,bl