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A Broken Monoku

. deserted asphalt road - distance never healed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/30/2014 9:04:00 PM
I wonder . . . was their an accident, a death or a journey down a road . . . and escape from an abusive past that distance won't heal . . . this is a great broken monoku . . . for their is not just one simple answer . . . a careful reader can see a great many things down this road.
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Date: 11/30/2014 4:11:00 PM
very deep and sad Carrie - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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