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A Broken Heart

A promise to be together is broken, just not a promise but my soul which always loved you, no matter how risky it was for me. I traded my heart in return for your love ended being betrayed and totally broke, wreck me completely but not my heart ,which is always for you and awaits you. Living happily with someone in the castle ,built of our memories' is a death bed to me. Just for second ,could not you see what you are to me Listen to my broken heart, what its saying to you. Take a step back and turn back around and see where I am, holding pieces of my heart in hands. You could not see tears in my ears and now you are making me cry. How could you just walk away from my life, from me crushing my soul. I will die for you every day , to see you alive. you were my valentine for a lifetime and you are gone leaving me in miserable pain. Atleast tell me how to live without you.

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 8/20/2023 6:56:00 PM

Poignant, painful, piercing ~ so exquisitely penned, kenisha! No wonder it was a contest winner, as I see from the comments

Kenisha Shines
Date: 8/22/2023 9:38:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading and sharing your views. Its really a pleasure to read your poems. have a great day ! :)

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/16/2017 12:39:00 PM

Such a sad but beautiful poem, you truly have talent for expressing true love and your feelings, remember somebody told me that the past is dead but the future is bright look ahead and you ll definately find someone but it s trey that when someone so close to you leaves you or went away it felt like your purpose of living has ended, you don t wanted to do anything however I m new here and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them

Kenisha Shines
Date: 6/18/2017 10:35:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind and supportive words.have a great day!

Skat A

Date: 7/24/2015 3:15:00 PM

Kenisha, congratulations on your Broken Heart win. **SKAT**

Kenisha Shines
Date: 7/25/2015 10:01:00 AM

Thank you so much and have a great weekend:)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/24/2015 1:11:00 AM

Congrats on ur superb winning write Kenisha!

Kenisha Shines
Date: 7/24/2015 10:17:00 AM

Thank you so much :) i didnot expect but really thank you for sharing the news.have a great weekend:)

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu

Date: 8/19/2013 10:02:00 AM

Aww! Emotional piece.

Kenisha Shines
Date: 8/20/2013 9:06:00 AM

thank you so much and have a great day.

Nikhileswari Swaminathan

Date: 5/28/2013 9:28:00 AM

a lovely write, as i read each word here penned, tears roll in my heart's eyes,i understand the pain, i hope it is not true and just a poem for sure

Kenisha Shines
Date: 5/29/2013 3:48:00 AM

thank you so much for reading and yes its just a poem.have a great day :)

Seren Roberts

Date: 4/3/2013 3:54:00 PM

so heart rending words,Congrats.....Seren

Kenisha Shines
Date: 4/4/2013 2:59:00 AM

thank you so much :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2013 3:09:00 PM

you really showed us a broken heart with yours! Congrats for your win.

Kenisha Shines
Date: 4/2/2013 3:45:00 AM

thank you so much :).

Donna Jones

Date: 4/1/2013 11:01:00 AM

Congrats...:-) Donna

Kenisha Shines
Date: 4/2/2013 3:45:00 AM

thank you so much :)

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/31/2013 9:55:00 AM

Congrats, Kenisha. Excellent. Nice going. Happy Easter. Ralph

Kenisha Shines
Date: 4/1/2013 3:04:00 AM

thank you so much and happy Easter have a great day :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/30/2013 11:13:00 PM

Kenisha, Congratulations with your awesome poem in my "Broken Heart" contest. it's a tough and painful life when love is broken. Goodnight~LINDA

Kenisha Shines
Date: 3/31/2013 3:09:00 AM

thank you so much .yes its really hard to deal with the broken love but we should never let go hope .

Sukkum Chang

Date: 11/26/2012 2:22:00 PM

i ca really feel the pain in this poem..very well written and i hope that person described in the poem finds his/her love.

Kenisha Shines
Date: 11/27/2012 7:00:00 AM

thank you so much

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/18/2012 4:56:00 AM

Vary emotional write. Sad. Well penned. Tfs

Kenisha Shines
Date: 9/19/2012 3:51:00 AM

thank you so much.

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/4/2012 9:13:00 AM

The name of the pain is "the pain of absence of loved one", it inspires to live life one side and kills from the other side. It's mysterious. Wonderfully adorned. Loved always, bl

Kenisha Shines
Date: 9/5/2012 12:52:00 AM

thank you so much dev.have a great day :)