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A Broken Dream

A broken dream shattered down life's open stream like a tear drop ripple the calmness of the water spread like an open wing of an eagle flying jet king letting out a sonic boom scream so fast that you never just saw what you seen among despair and doubt through the cold heat surround in despair and failure its why I strive to succeed yet it seems my life is old thread it comes out in seams as it frays is this the read deal or am I still living in an open closed dream? trapped in this mind prison a lockdown poetic king Im behind the gates and the influence wont let me go free I know I got the mind keys to achieve what I left behind but my own addiction chains wont break this concrete it wont let me leave I must step up to the plate and do me a deed broken dreams planted everyday just from a single seed Life is really about death so take heed AWAKE YOUR MIND THOUGHT NOW BEFORE YOU END UP JUST ANOTHER BROKEN DREAM

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/31/2012 1:09:00 PM
A thought provoking poem to share.
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