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A Broken Couplet

I always thought a couplet was romantic - two lines and two lovers together, ‘til your hand brought a third line into our poem, breaking that rhyme forever.

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Date: 2/28/2022 10:49:00 AM
Very original with such a fresh perspective Thomas. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/22/2022 8:24:00 PM
Unique and ingenious Thomas! Congratulations on your eighth place win in this Premiere contest. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/22/2022 7:30:00 PM
Beautiful couplet, Thomas. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 2/22/2022 6:16:00 PM
Excellent, Thomas. Thank you for entering my contest. Congratulations!!!!!!
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Date: 2/22/2022 5:49:00 PM
nice word play here, Thomas. I enjoyed pondering the thought.
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