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A Bright Thought Through All the Misery

Sitting here flushing out the tears drowning in my misery that's piling up through the years I thought of you On my face, a smile I read your poetry cuz it's been a while I don't know if I've thanked you for being "there" for me I can't imagaine how great a man you'll turn out to be It's unbelievable how sweet you are know that im happy to be your north star and if it were possible i'd cry on your shoulder lie down beside you as we grew older ************************ I'm not proud of this poem (from a literary standpoint), but I wrote it down anyway...because as I was sitting here being sad, he was the one thought that made me smile...and I had to tell him.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/16/2009 10:48:00 AM
I still give it a 7. It was perfect :')
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