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Your friendship glows like a bright day. Your face grins painting a bright day. Our sun will be green with envy. It will give up on a bright day. If only you could fly to the moon. You may recognize a bright day. You count for a lot to me dear. And we'll delight on a bright day. You'll be famous as a gold scout. Or quite guarantee a bright day.
Written: July 24, 2022

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Date: 7/26/2022 11:52:00 AM
Yes, this kind of reminded me of the time I tried a Ghazal. Very nice one!
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Date: 7/26/2022 3:47:00 AM
A well written Ghazal
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Date: 7/25/2022 5:07:00 AM
A bright poem brightening the mind and spirit !
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Date: 7/24/2022 11:38:00 PM
A lovely happy bright poem Lasaad! Debx
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Date: 7/24/2022 4:23:00 PM
Ahh!! A bright day!! Way to go. I enjoyed reading your work this Sunday. Sara
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Date: 7/24/2022 3:33:00 PM
I like the exuberance of this bright day. A lovely cheerful write, Lasaad.
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Date: 7/24/2022 3:27:00 PM
Interesting line: You'll be famous as a gold scout.
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