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wedding day blizzard found me driving in my gown; tipsy hubby snored *August 26, 2020 For Silent One’s “When Things Don’t Go as Planned” contest

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Date: 10/22/2020 12:24:00 PM
love this fun write
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Date: 8/30/2020 2:24:00 PM
Quite original, Carolyn. I enjoyed it with the picture as well. Congrats.
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Date: 8/29/2020 9:00:00 PM
Ha, ha! I'd say another challenge was trying not to freeze to death in that sleeveless wedding gown! Congrats, Carolyn! :) gw
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Date: 8/29/2020 1:05:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning line, Carolyn :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/29/2020 1:04:00 PM
Certainly a snow job! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 8/29/2020 10:42:00 AM
Great imagery in just one line Monoku, Carolyn. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/29/2020 9:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, I hope things got better after the honeymoon!
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Date: 8/29/2020 9:36:00 AM
Back with congrats on this podium win my friend.
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Date: 8/29/2020 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations! I can picture this. It happens this way.
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Date: 8/29/2020 5:38:00 AM
Enjoyed this so much and it such a cute story. God bless you with many more amazing writes... gina
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Date: 8/29/2020 5:22:00 AM
Back with congratulations, Carolyn! A truly deserved podium finish! Hugs // paul
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/29/2020 5:35:00 AM
Almost a foot of snow had fallen during the reception. Mom was afraid no one would show up, but they did and Dad paid the band to play longer than scheduled. Then everyone drove home in the blizzard.
Date: 8/29/2020 4:30:00 AM
On the brighter side, you were on the driving seat from the very beginning!! Congrats on your win!!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/29/2020 5:33:00 AM
Actually, I took the wheel after hubby crashed into a median. He had to pull over so I could get in the driver's seat. Thanks for reading.
Date: 8/29/2020 4:23:00 AM
The stuff of memories ~ glad it didn't end a lot worse.
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Date: 8/29/2020 2:47:00 AM
Is this a true event? Reminds me of November rain, how a wedding can be ruined... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/29/2020 4:05:00 AM
Yes, I had to take the wheel after hubby hit a median in the middle of the road. He had been drinking at the wedding, but I hadn't. Thanks for the fun contest!
Date: 8/27/2020 9:02:00 AM
Indeed a doubly challenging situation, Carolyn!! Very creative. Hugs // paul
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Date: 8/27/2020 8:38:00 AM
Oh so sweet Carolyn, bet you wanted to cuddle him and his tipsy snoring was cute! Your married him for better or worse! I see this winning, I hope it does. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/27/2020 8:03:00 AM
- ... so funny, Carolyn :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/26/2020 6:14:00 PM
That's insane! Desperately I'm hoping he picked up his act immediately from there! Great Monoku!!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/29/2020 5:37:00 AM
Not really. Long story, but we were happy together.
Date: 8/26/2020 5:09:00 PM
A sliver of life perfect for this contest which made me smile.
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Date: 8/26/2020 2:19:00 PM
LOL!
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Date: 8/26/2020 2:01:00 PM
Men get carried way..thank goodness for the loving, caring women. Well said, Carolyn. All the best.
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Date: 8/26/2020 1:47:00 PM
cute one, good luck in the contest Carolyn
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/29/2020 5:36:00 AM
So nice to see you here, Francine. I'm brainstorming for "gratitude." Hope you had a nice birthday last month!

Book: Shattered Sighs