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A Bride As Beautiful As She

Love, Magic, That is what Is in the air. Tonight, while the bride Walks down the isle to her Awaiting groom. Her lips twist upwards into a smile so sweet. How could he be so lucky, as to get a bride as beautiful as she is. Note: The Etheree form consists of ten lines. The first line has one syllable, The second has two, and so on and so forth. The poem will in end will have fifty-five syllables.

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Sierra Cowan

Date: 2/6/2011 12:27:00 AM

Thank you Robert, it's my first etheree that I have ever written :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/4/2011 10:44:00 PM

A nice example of an etheree. It is well written and descriptive.

Sierra Cowan

Date: 8/20/2010 10:01:00 PM

Thank ou both :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2010 10:33:00 PM

Very nicely done!! Congratulations, Sierra. LUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/17/2010 9:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Sierra in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest " Forms of Poetry 101". Love, Carol

Sierra Cowan

Date: 8/17/2010 8:49:00 AM

Thank you! :)

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/17/2010 7:54:00 AM

congrats on your HM with this lovely etheree

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/16/2010 9:21:00 PM

Congrats on the win, Sierra

Sierra Cowan

Date: 8/16/2010 9:18:00 PM

Thank you! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/16/2010 8:52:00 PM

Congrats Sierra on your HM in the Forms of Poetry 101 contest.. a new form and new poem to give u a special honor as a reward for your fine efforts ... enjoy sweet success.. with luv..

Sierra Cowan

Date: 8/15/2010 5:34:00 PM

thank you Celene :) Glad you liked it!

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 8/15/2010 1:46:00 PM

How beautiful your verse,as beautiful as she.