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A Break Up

A break up! I've had a breakup... With a person..?? No with my emotions, With my love and aspirations They said love's a give and take relation, But little did I know it demanded a high compensation... Every time I tried to share a piece of my heart I was gifted with the echoes of abhorrence that hit me hard, I see the softness shredding And anger growing stronger, Love slowly fading And detestation taking over... Was never accepted as an abundance of love Will never be accepted as one of hate, For a girl now grown so bitter and rough Will ever be accepted by one in her fate?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/27/2017 9:04:00 PM
Lekha, this poem is sadly beautiful with deeply expressed emotions and imagery. Well done and enjoyed! ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 12/28/2017 12:40:00 AM
You're welcome Lekha, it was my pleasure to read your poetry. Thank you Lekha for your lovely sentiments and I reflect them back to you. I think your poetry is amazing as well and I'd love to see more :) Warmest wishes to you for a happy and poetic new year. Keep writing as well my friend..~Susan
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Lekha Sharma
Date: 12/27/2017 11:39:00 PM
I really don't have words to thank you for taking out time to have a glance at my work and again for appreciating it... Also you are an absolutely amazing writer.. Keep writing n have a wonderful year ahead

Book: Shattered Sighs