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A Boy With Her Heart

A broken muscle, pumps and slackens. It's feeling dulled in her chest. Lifts a hand up to feel it move, But there's no sound beneath her breast. The veiny parts have all been cut, A very clever trick. He whispers, “if I can't be with her, I won't let her live.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/18/2017 12:42:00 PM
That is indeed scary... Painfully sad, very very clever way to describe this happening between people.
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Date: 2/15/2017 8:26:00 AM
That is very dark Tricia and kind of scary, though you have expressed this well.
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Tricia Campese
Date: 2/15/2017 8:43:00 AM
I'm a scary person....thank you for the comment! ;)

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