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A Bowl of Cherries

If life’s a bowl of cherries, Or you think that saying fits, You must realize there’s a factor That the axiom omits. Which is cherries, though delicious, Have a stone lodged deep inside, The existence of which isn’t something That can be denied. Therefore, optimists and pessimists Can share that great big bowl, As the cherries and the pits together Work to make it whole. It’s a fact that life’s not fair, though, So if Proverbville permits, I propose instead of cherries, We say life is just the pits.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/19/2016 11:38:00 AM
It's funny how life seems the pits. And all it does is snow. But guaranteed when spring thaw comes, those pits will start to grow.
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Date: 1/18/2016 9:24:00 PM
Reminds me of a book written by a female humorist some years ago. Although I never got a chance to read it, it was a best seller. Do you recall the author's name? Another good write, Ilene.
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Date: 1/17/2016 5:41:00 PM
you are ONE wise lady!! With chuckles for all!!
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/18/2016 5:00:00 PM
thank you, andrea! it's always a great feeling when i can get some humor in - glad you noticed!
Date: 1/17/2016 4:32:00 PM
Clever, deep, and funny all in one, Ilene. An exceptional write.
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Date: 1/18/2016 4:59:00 PM
wow, that makes me feel so good, leo larry! thank you!
Date: 1/17/2016 1:30:00 PM
Very entertaining! Splendid phrasing, imagery and cadence as per usual! Well done my dear!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/18/2016 4:58:00 PM
thank you, keith! a comment from you means a lot to me...
Date: 1/17/2016 12:19:00 PM
charming indeed, ilene.. as erma bombeck would say, "if life is a bowl of cherries, why are we in the pits?"... much enjoyed; yes!..huggs
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Date: 1/17/2016 1:24:00 PM
you're not the first person who mentioned erma bombeck in relation to my poetry. thank you for the comment, nette!
Date: 1/16/2016 10:41:00 PM
...and again you make me smile with your wit! Lovely, wise and funny...Loved your write, Ilene! :-)
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/17/2016 1:22:00 PM
thank you for the lovely comment, kim! much appreciated!
Date: 1/16/2016 9:16:00 PM
This is great, Ilene! I especially like your 3rd stanza. I never thought of it before but life is made up of the good and the bad, just like the cherry and the pit. Hopefully I'm making sense. Love, Kim
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/17/2016 1:22:00 PM
yes, you are, kim! thank you for the comment!

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