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A Body For Your Service

I'm a ****, womaniser, philandering man whore, I'm a player of every woman I know. Every single and divorced, each widowed and married, Every man's lawn it is I that will mow. I wine and then dine, laugh, smile, and chat, She feels needed, important, secure. I help her feel want for the feelings she feels, And safe to feel feelings of impure. Others want quick, straight to the point, No staring at stars or the moon. Like a quick text message to meet at her place, On Tuesday around about noon. What I do is so nice, I'm so good for this town, How I live is kind of an art. I provide what women need, want or desire, All from the goodness of my heart. For SO Saints and Sinners contest. this was written 10th September

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Alexis Y.

Date: 11/8/2016 8:12:00 AM

Hi Lewis, Congratulations on your wining write: -) Alexis

Darren White

Date: 11/7/2016 12:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement, I liked this one very much :)

Candance Johnson

Date: 9/15/2016 1:19:00 PM

This poem is very interesting. it raises an eyebrow. Although I cant say I (like) simply because it resurrects some discomfort from past situations that I have experience from a man like the one depicted in this poem. But then again good poetry SHOULD provoke emotion. However it is very clever, creative, easy to comprehend and is well put together.

Candance Johnson

Date: 9/14/2016 5:12:00 PM

is this really humor?? I see this as one of the many contributing issues to a social defect. A social ISSUE. IT represents the men I run from. The men that many woman beg to never encounter again after she realizes his thrill is gone. THIS has caused so many woman to settle for just a body because substance is almost non-existent now days. I wonder what guys who do this will feel when another man that feels the same way does it to HIS daughter, sister, mother.... Funny! lol

Lewis Raynes
Date: 9/15/2016 4:24:00 AM

Thank you so much for ur honesty and openness in interpreting this write. I agree, this man feels nothing about the woman after the event. I don't get how some men can be emotionally blind and not seek relationships that are deeper

Keith Logan

Date: 9/10/2016 5:37:00 AM

I gave this a high rating because it made me smile. There is always a place for humour.

Lewis Raynes
Date: 9/10/2016 6:26:00 AM

Thanks Keith, yep, its all fun and games