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A Bluish Shine

Waterfall gushing on moss-covered rocks, breaking up a bluish shine; tree dangling from wet boulder crushes the ginger, to deplete it of its light... Waterfall playing a scherzo, ever grant me this sweet symphony... Entered in Raul Moreno's contest, "Rhythm of the falls" Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 10/13/2009 4:44:00 AM
Nice descriptive write. Keep writing. Good luck in contest. Sara
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Date: 10/11/2009 9:19:00 AM
I have read your amazing poetry today and enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing with us Andrew. I hope you are enjoying your weekend. Wishing you the best in the contest. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/11/2009 7:55:00 AM
Wow...this is wonderful...Raul will love this, I'm sure!! Best wishes...looks like a winning poem!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/11/2009 6:59:00 AM
perfect image of Raul's picture! Andrew!... jim
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Date: 10/11/2009 6:18:00 AM
Brilliant imagery, Andrew. The reader can truly see the tree crashing and hear the symphony of the falls. Very nice! Love, Carolyn
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